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ENGLISH LITERATURE A
Nipah Valley, A Hidden Destination in Sukabumi
"Sukabumi" comes from the Sanskrit language suka, "pleasure, happiness, delight" and bhumi, "earth, land". So "Sukabumi" means "the Earth that is liked". Although Sukabumi is a small city. But like its name, Sukabumi has so many interesting destination that is likely to having fun and for spending holidays. Many tourist already known a popular destination, but some of people still don't know about tourist attractions other than popular ones such as Curug Sawer or Situ Gunung. For example, Nipah Valley. This place is a bit hidden. Inside, there is a villa to stay in, a swimming pool, a small restaurant, and there is even a place for archery. Because this place is rarely known by many people, this is perfect for those who like a quiet place.
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Title: Nipah Valley, A Hidden Destination in Sukabumi
Attention Getter: "Sukabumi" comes from the Sanskrit language suka, "pleasure, happiness, delight" and bhumi, "earth, land". So "Sukabumi" means "the Earth that is liked".
State your problem: Although Sukabumi is a small city. But like its name, Sukabumi has so many interesting destination that is likely to having fun and for spending holidays.
Bridge or transition sentences: Many tourist already known a popular destination, but some of people still don't know about tourist attractions other than popular ones such as Curug Sawer or Situ Gunung.
Thesis statement: For example, Nipah Valley. This place is a bit hidden and the location is in Karang Tengah. Inside, there is a villa to stay in, a swimming pool, a small restaurant, and there is even a place for archery. Because this place is rarely known by many people, this is perfect for those who like a quiet place.
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