Salwa Khairunnisa
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ENGLISH LITERATURE A
Outline :
Attention getter:
Sukabumi was the smallest town in West Java. However, it had many hangout spots which are not inferior to the others.
State problem:
Sometimes the young boys and girls spend their evenings outside and also spend a lot of their money to look cool.
Bridge or transition:
They didn't realise that there was a place, hangout spots in Sukabumi that was inexpensive and had nice open views, such as Butler
Thesis:
Besides it, actually the comfortable and suitable one to be the hangout spot, of course it was inexpensive and had a old-school view, such as Restu Ibu.
Restu Ibu in Sukabumi
Sukabumi was the smallest town in West Java. However, it had many hangout spots which are not inferior to the others. Sometimes the young boys and girls spend their evenings outside and also spend a lot of their money to look cool. They didn't realise that there was a place, hangout spots in Sukabumi that was inexpensive and had nice open views, such as Butler. Besides it, actually the comfortable and suitable one to be the hangout spot, of course it was inexpensive and had a old-school view, such as Restu Ibu.
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