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Topic sentence: What Causes Person to be a Perfectionist?
Support sentence: There's many factors can contribute to whether perfectionism develops.
Spesific supporting sentences: A few include like having a mental health issues such as anxiety or obsessive-compulsive disorder (OCD). Maybe an insecure early attachment, like having parent who shows disapproval when the children's effort doesn't pleasure them or didn't result a perfection. Feeling fear of disapproval from others and other feelings of insecurity itself. Also, people with a history of high achievement sometimes feel too much pressure to maintain their previous achievements. This often leads them to engage in perfectionistic behavior.
Conclusion: So, perfectionism can be caused by several small things such as parental upbringing, environment, fear of disapproval by others, dislike of being less than perfect. If this situation continue until they growth, people can be difficult to respect themselves and others too, they always push themselves in order to have a satisfied feelings for the achievements.
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What causes person to be a perfectionist? There's many factors can contribute to whether perfectionism develops. A few include like having a mental health issues such as anxiety or obsessive-compulsive disorder (OCD). Maybe an insecure early attachment, like having parent who shows disapproval when the children's effort doesn't pleasure them or didn't result a perfection. Feeling fear of disapproval from others and other feelings of insecurity itself. Also, people with a history of high achievement sometimes feel too much pressure to maintain their previous achievements. This often leads them to engage in perfectionistic behavior. So, perfectionism can be caused by several small things such as parental upbringing, environment, fear of disapproval by others, dislike of being less than perfect. If this situation continue until they growth, people can be difficult to respect themselves and others too, they always push themselves in order to have a satisfied feelings for the achievements.
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